Nice essay, it is very well written. Though, wheres the video part?
Fantastic piano music. You did an excellent job articulating. I love it when you refer to Thoreau building a cabin as Thoreau building a new life for himself.
There is definitely some very deep and thoughtful thinking in here, but I'm with Reid... Where is the video?
I like the essay a lot, and I love the opening paragraph. I so wish you came into the water though! But the video...?
nice essay, and good use of "fancy" vocab, but i know you have your video somewhere
Why all the horse pictures?
You sound kind of like Mahin
I would like to start by saying I love the last comment about Maahin and your response. The video was outstanding. I think that you made some very great points like the one that Owen talked about when you compared Thoreau building his cabin to him building a new life. It may sound like I am just repeating him but Im not. I really loved your video and great job
This mad me go wow! Great video essay. Clear and well done, a little late posting it but it was still a great video essay. Great points and arguments. In all great essay.
This was a great video! Your talking was clear, and thoughht provoking. I have to agree with owen, why all the horse pictures? But the sound quality was good and it was enjoyable to watch.
Great job Ali, it is clear you put in a lot of effort and it resulted in a good video essay. You have a great video with a great essay and you had some good arguments, anyway you did a very good job on this.
I liked the video but I am not sure with some of the pictures but great over all
Good work, Ali. This video came together nicely!
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